Want My Eyes on Your First Chapter?

Your first chapter decides whether a reader stays or puts the book down. Before you write another page, let me read it and tell you what works and what needs to change.

Why me:

• 4x-published author

• Licensed educator in professional writing

• 11+ years of editing experience

• Christian  book-writing coach

I know what makes a reader keep going, because I've done it in my own books and taught it to other writers.

What I look at:

• Your opening hook

• Your main promise to the reader

• Your flow from one section to the next

• Your voice

What happens after you buy:
You can buy now, even if your chapter isn't done. I'll email you with instructions on what to send. Once I have your chapter, I'll email you again, and we'll build your plan together.

A quick note:

I'll focus on what's working and what to strengthen. I don't rewrite chapters or do line edits, so you keep your voice and make the changes yourself.